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This is my first song recorded. just got enough money to build a basic studio, and get pro-tools se. without any knowledge or college education with recording, mixing or any of that, i recorded my own verse over the shady 2.0 cypher beat. i do need better quality vocals, and some editing. but for starting out, id like to see what you guys think. My plan is to continue to practice with promotional…