The city i live in
Say yours n read mine
My mind much different
Your boring flow make me sleep
Earthquak hit n i missed it
Info about me
the city I live in
Never go outside calm
Due to the drama n friction
I wanna piss on the law
All the cops
In the district
Take my rights
Right off
It's wrong take away my addiction
Freedom of speech
Cause I speak for the ppl
It's weak to delete
What I think
Never on a tv show
Fuck this fake
character
Reality
That's not what we live
Cop cars 4 deep
look like a black n white taxi
Crown Victoria
The sound that you create
Drive all day
N run random incense plates
I got weed n what
You got a city falling apart
Continue with your bitch work
Judemtal from just the view of the car
Ending up at scenes
Tape the perimeter
5 min late
Crys from a sister
Holding her teen brother
Young in a street gang
Throwing up signs
They did it so he could
Refeame
He had a switch blade
They had a .22
Rivals in the wild
Aim n shoot
Run on foot
Get away no witness
Gun in the bush
Another day he'll get it
It's last of days
Do anything for a pay check
Ryhem my life away
It's take time n paticne
Slowly developed a group
That wants to change it
It's a dream that I pray
So till the end I chase it
Cause i take advantage of
English n demolish it's language
Educate the other brain
Polish n train it
That we can make difference
2 years of payments
Rap till I die
So I aim for greatness
Cause it could be any day
Salinas streets are dangerous
I'm blessed to be still breathing
20 years is what my age is
I'm not going down with out a fight
Social security n nameless
Salinas California
Come here it's 90 percent natives
Mayan ansesters
Slaves now
Survive with under the table pay checks
Under minimal shit
How my people supposed to wage this
10 in a house
I'm just saying
califorina n plate shift
The family went to church
Spit a verse n tape it
My mind much different
Your boring flow make me sleep
Earthquak hit n i missed it
Info about me
the city I live in
Never go outside calm
Due to the drama n friction
I wanna piss on the law
All the cops
In the district
Take my rights
Right off
It's wrong take away my addiction
Freedom of speech
Cause I speak for the ppl
It's weak to delete
What I think
Never on a tv show
Fuck this fake
character
Reality
That's not what we live
Cop cars 4 deep
look like a black n white taxi
Crown Victoria
The sound that you create
Drive all day
N run random incense plates
I got weed n what
You got a city falling apart
Continue with your bitch work
Judemtal from just the view of the car
Ending up at scenes
Tape the perimeter
5 min late
Crys from a sister
Holding her teen brother
Young in a street gang
Throwing up signs
They did it so he could
Refeame
He had a switch blade
They had a .22
Rivals in the wild
Aim n shoot
Run on foot
Get away no witness
Gun in the bush
Another day he'll get it
It's last of days
Do anything for a pay check
Ryhem my life away
It's take time n paticne
Slowly developed a group
That wants to change it
It's a dream that I pray
So till the end I chase it
Cause i take advantage of
English n demolish it's language
Educate the other brain
Polish n train it
That we can make difference
2 years of payments
Rap till I die
So I aim for greatness
Cause it could be any day
Salinas streets are dangerous
I'm blessed to be still breathing
20 years is what my age is
I'm not going down with out a fight
Social security n nameless
Salinas California
Come here it's 90 percent natives
Mayan ansesters
Slaves now
Survive with under the table pay checks
Under minimal shit
How my people supposed to wage this
10 in a house
I'm just saying
califorina n plate shift
The family went to church
Spit a verse n tape it
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Permalink Reply by Bobby Garcia on -
opinions?
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Permalink Reply by Bobby Garcia on
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Opinions?
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Permalink Reply by Kentucky Boi on -
Horrible.
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Permalink Reply by Bobby Garcia on
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Thank. Still working on it.
Kentucky Boi said:Horrible.
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You going to put a beat behind it soon? I would just slow down and make it a little more fluid. Sounds rushed in places. Also go back over the lyrics and fine tune some of the word play. I get the concept of the song but it seems all over the place. It goes from cops harrassing to gang violence and the effect it has on folks to the economic status of struggling latinos. Just a little too broad for one song. Make it a little more concise and I think it would be better. Keep working, no one is perfect on the first go around.
Bobby Garcia said:Thank. Still working on it.
Kentucky Boi said:Horrible.
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Permalink Reply by Bobby Garcia on
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Na I don't have any beat programs. I just relieve stress through these. Instead of being out getting caught up In shit.
Kentucky Boi said:You going to put a beat behind it soon? I would just slow down and make it a little more fluid. Sounds rushed in places. Also go back over the lyrics and fine tune some of the word play. I get the concept of the song but it seems all over the place. It goes from cops harrassing to gang violence and the effect it has on folks to the economic status of struggling latinos. Just a little too broad for one song. Make it a little more concise and I think it would be better. Keep working, no one is perfect on the first go around.
Bobby Garcia said:Thank. Still working on it.
Kentucky Boi said:Horrible.
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Permalink Reply by Kentucky Boi on
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At least you're smart enough to have a positive outlet for your stress instead being a knucklehead out there in the streets. Keep it up man, it will start to come together for you.
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Permalink Reply by Bobby Garcia on
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I'm just trying to do before my baby comes. Gotta keep at it
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Permalink Reply by TECHN9ciaNE on -
this shit is terrible
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Permalink Reply by Bobby Garcia on
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Why?
TECHN9ciaNE said:this shit is terrible
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