hate on me, 

but please do it, creatively,

go ahead freestyle rhyme words, but try it with no childish, type, verse. 

or express how your mind hurts, 

than i'll go, and we'll see if mines worst.

no limits confined to time or lines dispersed. 

i got that rhythm. ...the type to make vaginas' squirt.

i slither in em'... while you sneak a peak from behind her skirt.

 


 

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Hey man.. I am new.. I don't pride myself in knowledge of internet forums, sorry if you do. Old enough to be my dad, so? I'm not the one calling names like bitch dude. I'm not the one who's sensitive here haha..

CJsiccness said:
ok ur surely new and fyi im probably old enough to be ur dad p.s. quit cryin you sound like a bitch

not sure if this rhymes but ill just say it..

 

ghetto superman u fuckin homo,

aaaaaaand i cant wait til u die.

he knows interesting things and i can agree with him i love tech but this guy knows deeper but y'all hate thats all this weba page is he aint saying anything bad at all about tech just saying hey look at this information....
ALL THIS FOURM IS STUPID YOUNG 13 YEAR OLD GIRLS WHO HATE AND RUN THEIR MOUTHS LOL
hahaha this. DE's lucky he got banned, or else he would have that shit locked up

CJsiccness said:
and........ghetto superman is still in the running for douchebag of the year, watch out D.E.
He got banned?

Cole said:
hahaha this. DE's lucky he got banned, or else he would have that shit locked up

CJsiccness said:
and........ghetto superman is still in the running for douchebag of the year, watch out D.E.

i said no limits confined to time or lines 

but your not even tryin to knock mine with rhymes

i cock n9nes, and walk blocks cuz i'm, tryin to bang against gangs, to stop crime.

your clogged brains, and frost bit vains, explains, why towards me your bane. 

what, no forward thinking sane?

how bout nomore pourin drinkin weekends wakin up weaklings, who seekin seepage insane, rituals habituals unbiblical bitches just complan,

but i can't stop the off end,

it's not my fault they can not, comprehend! 

cuz the pain from they brain is too much when im sprayN, like a spran you can't break me.

i can't, won't, and don't let them faze me, that would be lazy, so thus is why i bust this much crazy, puffin this stuff is amazing, but i've toned it down lately, and laying with my lady is something my God gave me, i would never trade her, so she will never betray me.

and so what i live for God, i can't make her wet daily? it was a metaphor, how my rhythm makes you look like a foogaisy


ps insult and appalled? that a far stretch, i'd have to hear you spit it. 
Shane said:

Your Local Ghetto Superman, no need for me to insult

He could simply look in the mirror and be appauled

I could slam his face in cookie doe and make gorilla cookies

Yes a joke from Sanford and Son, a funny show indeed

Back to the topic this guy hit a double wammy

Fugly with no smarts a disease to his family

Mug so bad ruin a picture with Hilton, Jennifer, and

anyone that works with the playboy bunny

Becarful when you see him walkin and it's sunny

Dark truly a only place he can thrive and say he's not ugly

Rigged disgusted bumps like he tryed to play rugbee

Thinking about his face for 12 bars wasn't easy

 

Ps if you just wanna practice your ryhming don't let the assholes down you. cough cough "CJsiccness" cough "ElJefe7107"

Not bad with the ryhming, and writing

But I can't seem to find the timing

Where you insulting me or trying?

Or just using your words for gliding

Did you count the bars, well you should start,

It may be hard and write from the heart

Some of witch you did with words that large,

But Im gonna write to pick and gouge

Down on your lyrics, gonna tear it,

So you can repair it, then go share it

Just helpin you work out where your weared out,

So spare the small stuff and gear what your about

I have confidence in what you rhyme

So I wanna help you at your grind

Use big words but not just for a show

Don't be a ABC rapper with your flow

and unlike my rhymes, ryhme 2 syllables

People love that, find you reliable

Use mathmatics and make it readable

If you understand what I just said

Then your ready to go out and begin

Your jounry or hobby, get your gun loaded

 

PS: harder then I thought to write down verses. After trying I gotta give people who rhyme with two syllables and crazy flows or internal ryhmes credit.

I could write more on the topic but I don't wanna make it to long. :D

 

yea i just keep it goin  freestyle off dome like a poem.

 

i don't know how to count bars and all that

i just flow-N-go all out, hard and not wack.

 

had to speak on what i feel. ya feel? i feel you real.

we spillin whats ill so whats the deal with them squelin on us for stealin from the teal.

 

they just hatin to be hatin and its gonna piss me off, in my state, we been waiting since sir mix alot. 

but i aint bout let them get me red and hot, why? just to get these bitches off?

 

im just tryin ta kickin livin straight,but i'm rollin with them felons,  

bout to blow up in this state, like i'm  mount st Helen's  

 

  P.s. regarding the one i did before this:I was dissin the hatefull/negative commenting on this thread, not you in-particular 

Shane said:

Not bad with the ryhming, and writing

But I can't seem to find the timing

Where you insulting me or trying?

Or just using your words for gliding

Did you count the bars, well you should start,

It may be hard and write from the heart

Some of witch you did with words that large,

But Im gonna write to pick and gouge

Down on your lyrics, gonna tear it,

So you can repair it, then go share it

Just helpin you work out where your weared out,

So spare the small stuff and gear what your about

I have confidence in what you rhyme

So I wanna help you at your grind

Use big words but not just for a show

Don't be a ABC rapper with your flow

and unlike my rhymes, ryhme 2 syllables

People love that, find you reliable

Use mathmatics and make it readable

If you understand what I just said

Then your ready to go out and begin

Your jounry or hobby, get your gun loaded

 

PS: harder then I thought to write down verses. After trying I gotta give people who rhyme with two syllables and crazy flows or internal ryhmes credit.

I could write more on the topic but I don't wanna make it to long. :D

 

Freestyle off the top with no time to think

I'll give it a shot and see what I can bring

Hard to do sense Im out of words to sing

Really need to give this more practice

like a hard working actress

my favorite is morgan freeman

figured Id bring that up and chan-

nel it straight from brain

and I understand what your sayin

Yea these people do hate alot but its okay

Like Katt william says, you got 40 haters you need 40 more

I agree with that all the way to my core

Most this a freestyle straight off the top

some bars need 20 seconds to drop

If you freestyled that first verse thats pretty good

In my opinion atleast thats what I think in this mood

Good bye now Imma go eat and watch tv

Two and a half men is on I gotta go and see

 

I just wanted to try and freestyle. In real time I proble would of been done after the first 3 line cause I had to think for a couple seconds. 

some puase, and wait. 

just ta spit a bunch a  faux pas, and hate.  

bustin nothin as real, as the fauxhawk on yates.

but in case you didn't know faux, means fake.

 

i'll spit a lil simple syllable session..

just to show some skill in this sentence i'm sendin.

i'll stricly stick wit S's so you suckas can let it set in..

like i shanked a satanic ese, smoken shards & sellin sin 

 

anybody wanna come against this then get at me.

but in a minute i'mma diminish the enemies livin so wickedly.

just like how i twist N spit these lyrics so vivid an specifically.

who thinkin bout bustin out freest-yle rounds? ya kiddin me,

 

i'm killin thee epitome bad,

spillin milla litters of sweat for the  fam

tryin to get up on my chedda

and make it better in the land! 

 

 

 

they' breakin him down, wit all ther suspecian.

they critical hounds; but they just wishin.

no fakin we bout it, every day missions  

they sound qwick ta bee down. but is they listn'n

 

comin up. from, way up in the north.

to drop a lil repor t

always spittin from the porch

and i'm repin it like a torch

flammed up, like the love i got and plus some more

drapped up, in the blood, like, Christ and his amore

and here i'll stand untill the lord....

seems fit, an no de-mons, shall reach men, who preach that belief and,

the deep end will seek them, who teach to decieve fam, and the men

meant to be sick,

boi i'm so mentaly swift

when i'm inventin my script,

but i hope that the message is sent.

to the masses hell bent,

hope this help them to vent 

throuGh disastrous events

never followin hollowness 

no sorrow after ye repents, the darkness can not be missed.

take a second , then step on back from that abyss.

get ya shoes on. why you choose On, to lean up on the fence.

get a move on, and cruz on to the light man, it's gonna be bliss. riiiiiiight. 

look for them 7's and keep them 6's out your life.

damned if you don't. peace out, ya'll good night.

 

 

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