hate on me,
but please do it, creatively,
go ahead freestyle rhyme words, but try it with no childish, type, verse.
or express how your mind hurts,
than i'll go, and we'll see if mines worst.
no limits confined to time or lines dispersed.
i got that rhythm. ...the type to make vaginas' squirt.
i slither in em'... while you sneak a peak from behind her skirt.
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Permalink Reply by Joseph Aj on June 2, 2011 at 9:53pm ok ur surely new and fyi im probably old enough to be ur dad p.s. quit cryin you sound like a bitch
Permalink Reply by 1990-SiCK on June 2, 2011 at 9:58pm not sure if this rhymes but ill just say it..
ghetto superman u fuckin homo,
aaaaaaand i cant wait til u die.
Permalink Reply by scooba steve on June 2, 2011 at 10:23pm
Permalink Reply by scooba steve on June 2, 2011 at 10:27pm
Permalink Reply by ₡₱♛ on June 3, 2011 at 12:14am and........ghetto superman is still in the running for douchebag of the year, watch out D.E.
hahaha this. DE's lucky he got banned, or else he would have that shit locked up
CJsiccness said:
and........ghetto superman is still in the running for douchebag of the year, watch out D.E.
Permalink Reply by Your Local_Ghetto Superman on June 4, 2011 at 3:36pm i said no limits confined to time or lines
but your not even tryin to knock mine with rhymes
i cock n9nes, and walk blocks cuz i'm, tryin to bang against gangs, to stop crime.
your clogged brains, and frost bit vains, explains, why towards me your bane.
what, no forward thinking sane?
how bout nomore pourin drinkin weekends wakin up weaklings, who seekin seepage insane, rituals habituals unbiblical bitches just complan,
but i can't stop the off end,
it's not my fault they can not, comprehend!
cuz the pain from they brain is too much when im sprayN, like a spran you can't break me.
i can't, won't, and don't let them faze me, that would be lazy, so thus is why i bust this much crazy, puffin this stuff is amazing, but i've toned it down lately, and laying with my lady is something my God gave me, i would never trade her, so she will never betray me.
and so what i live for God, i can't make her wet daily? it was a metaphor, how my rhythm makes you look like a foogaisy
Your Local Ghetto Superman, no need for me to insult
He could simply look in the mirror and be appauled
I could slam his face in cookie doe and make gorilla cookies
Yes a joke from Sanford and Son, a funny show indeed
Back to the topic this guy hit a double wammy
Fugly with no smarts a disease to his family
Mug so bad ruin a picture with Hilton, Jennifer, and
anyone that works with the playboy bunny
Becarful when you see him walkin and it's sunny
Dark truly a only place he can thrive and say he's not ugly
Rigged disgusted bumps like he tryed to play rugbee
Thinking about his face for 12 bars wasn't easy
Ps if you just wanna practice your ryhming don't let the assholes down you. cough cough "CJsiccness" cough "ElJefe7107"
Permalink Reply by Shane on June 4, 2011 at 4:55pm Not bad with the ryhming, and writing
But I can't seem to find the timing
Where you insulting me or trying?
Or just using your words for gliding
Did you count the bars, well you should start,
It may be hard and write from the heart
Some of witch you did with words that large,
But Im gonna write to pick and gouge
Down on your lyrics, gonna tear it,
So you can repair it, then go share it
Just helpin you work out where your weared out,
So spare the small stuff and gear what your about
I have confidence in what you rhyme
So I wanna help you at your grind
Use big words but not just for a show
Don't be a ABC rapper with your flow
and unlike my rhymes, ryhme 2 syllables
People love that, find you reliable
Use mathmatics and make it readable
If you understand what I just said
Then your ready to go out and begin
Your jounry or hobby, get your gun loaded
PS: harder then I thought to write down verses. After trying I gotta give people who rhyme with two syllables and crazy flows or internal ryhmes credit.
I could write more on the topic but I don't wanna make it to long. :D
Permalink Reply by Your Local_Ghetto Superman on June 4, 2011 at 5:53pm yea i just keep it goin freestyle off dome like a poem.
i don't know how to count bars and all that
i just flow-N-go all out, hard and not wack.
had to speak on what i feel. ya feel? i feel you real.
we spillin whats ill so whats the deal with them squelin on us for stealin from the teal.
they just hatin to be hatin and its gonna piss me off, in my state, we been waiting since sir mix alot.
but i aint bout let them get me red and hot, why? just to get these bitches off?
im just tryin ta kickin livin straight,but i'm rollin with them felons,
bout to blow up in this state, like i'm mount st Helen's
P.s. regarding the one i did before this:I was dissin the hatefull/negative commenting on this thread, not you in-particular
Shane said:
Not bad with the ryhming, and writing
But I can't seem to find the timing
Where you insulting me or trying?
Or just using your words for gliding
Did you count the bars, well you should start,
It may be hard and write from the heart
Some of witch you did with words that large,
But Im gonna write to pick and gouge
Down on your lyrics, gonna tear it,
So you can repair it, then go share it
Just helpin you work out where your weared out,
So spare the small stuff and gear what your about
I have confidence in what you rhyme
So I wanna help you at your grind
Use big words but not just for a show
Don't be a ABC rapper with your flow
and unlike my rhymes, ryhme 2 syllables
People love that, find you reliable
Use mathmatics and make it readable
If you understand what I just said
Then your ready to go out and begin
Your jounry or hobby, get your gun loaded
PS: harder then I thought to write down verses. After trying I gotta give people who rhyme with two syllables and crazy flows or internal ryhmes credit.
I could write more on the topic but I don't wanna make it to long. :D
Permalink Reply by Shane on June 4, 2011 at 6:24pm Freestyle off the top with no time to think
I'll give it a shot and see what I can bring
Hard to do sense Im out of words to sing
Really need to give this more practice
like a hard working actress
my favorite is morgan freeman
figured Id bring that up and chan-
nel it straight from brain
and I understand what your sayin
Yea these people do hate alot but its okay
Like Katt william says, you got 40 haters you need 40 more
I agree with that all the way to my core
Most this a freestyle straight off the top
some bars need 20 seconds to drop
If you freestyled that first verse thats pretty good
In my opinion atleast thats what I think in this mood
Good bye now Imma go eat and watch tv
Two and a half men is on I gotta go and see
I just wanted to try and freestyle. In real time I proble would of been done after the first 3 line cause I had to think for a couple seconds.
Permalink Reply by Your Local_Ghetto Superman on June 21, 2011 at 3:30pm some puase, and wait.
just ta spit a bunch a faux pas, and hate.
bustin nothin as real, as the fauxhawk on yates.
but in case you didn't know faux, means fake.
i'll spit a lil simple syllable session..
just to show some skill in this sentence i'm sendin.
i'll stricly stick wit S's so you suckas can let it set in..
like i shanked a satanic ese, smoken shards & sellin sin
anybody wanna come against this then get at me.
but in a minute i'mma diminish the enemies livin so wickedly.
just like how i twist N spit these lyrics so vivid an specifically.
who thinkin bout bustin out freest-yle rounds? ya kiddin me,
i'm killin thee epitome bad,
spillin milla litters of sweat for the fam
tryin to get up on my chedda
and make it better in the land!
Permalink Reply by Your Local_Ghetto Superman on June 24, 2011 at 5:01am they' breakin him down, wit all ther suspecian.
they critical hounds; but they just wishin.
no fakin we bout it, every day missions
they sound qwick ta bee down. but is they listn'n
comin up. from, way up in the north.
to drop a lil repor t
always spittin from the porch
and i'm repin it like a torch
flammed up, like the love i got and plus some more
drapped up, in the blood, like, Christ and his amore
and here i'll stand untill the lord....
seems fit, an no de-mons, shall reach men, who preach that belief and,
the deep end will seek them, who teach to decieve fam, and the men
meant to be sick,
boi i'm so mentaly swift
when i'm inventin my script,
but i hope that the message is sent.
to the masses hell bent,
hope this help them to vent
throuGh disastrous events
never followin hollowness
no sorrow after ye repents, the darkness can not be missed.
take a second , then step on back from that abyss.
get ya shoes on. why you choose On, to lean up on the fence.
get a move on, and cruz on to the light man, it's gonna be bliss. riiiiiiight.
look for them 7's and keep them 6's out your life.
damned if you don't. peace out, ya'll good night.
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