Hi, I just figured I'd make a official post where people could come to write a verse and have other people criticise it. Kinda like working on your ryhming craft, Ability, and what not.

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this that twisted sick shit bare witness/ to business of greatness that been god gifted/ twist a few slicks of spliff and get lifted/ you missed it your bitch didnt now she wanna kiss dick/ i dismiss your lame raps that crap stains the mic/ the pains in my right and left ears im close to being deaf/ no clef i speak the truth when i let loose in the booth/ poof i spit magic damn that shits classic/ that acid none of that fag shit im not havin' it/ that trash you spit get blacklisted imagine if it/ passed for being a hit but you gas while im the shit/ yeah they smell you but you go away but when i drop im here to stay....no flush
my bad slicks is suppose to be sticks in the second line lol

Haha i liked that one

lol thanks man

When I come to the mic i strike, like a 2 hot dikes cause my shits tight

and it flows like sprite, I turn heads on sight, with my lyrical might

that smites, your height, to the height of a wrecked kite

Despite the slight light to night flight bite you get

The ride you get down the dark slide, is far to narrow visioned not wide

enough, cause varietys what i hide, to light im blind

As bordem brings my dark side, the katrina tide

Takin you for a dark glide, Looking at my rebels you see they fried

and now looking dark they dryed up to ashes

And thoughts to leave i give you gashes, and many lashes

now you got dark red rashes, and close your eyes as your life flashes

 

in lynch hungs closet pullin out the used tools/ cut the fools jewels from his sack make em sip that ipecac/ i grip the mac bust at his feet for the torture/ the aura of the horror is gorified by i/ dont try to move a muscle or ill bite your biceps off/ spit em out and ice em all in the frig then i dig/ out your eyeball wit my index youll light crawl and then next/ you'll relinquish the inners from your intest/_ines i stay messin wit the evils i see you/ imma leave you in this room to roit an smell like fecal

Whats up Jimmy Nims nice idea for a forum post

Hard to think as im watching the Donald Trump roast

The Situation from Jersey Shore did a bad job

The crowd was booing suprised they didn't forma mob

But Snoop Dogg on the other hand did good

From watching the last roast I knew he could

But wait now Donald Trump is gonna come up

Let's see how he doe's on his run up

Wish I could tell you, but I'm Finished

Made it to 10th Bar the rest is deminished

 

 

 

I'm leaking into sickology but I been a suporter since,

Angehellic came out and that made me wanna hit a clit,

Demons are always in the numerous state of three six,

But when I throw up the digits that just means Im sick,

I cant understand all the fuckin pillow talkin,

Through the radio like lil waynes got em'.

I warned him to go on a fuckin hunger strike,

He said fuck food I laughed at the fuckin dyke,

But then he said fuck you so then I started a fist fight,

Then bouncer choped his head off with a butcher knife,

Now its Weezy meat on the menu what a fuckin delight,

I like eating empty brains of false lyricism,

Maybe Ill spit him out when a fuckin note hits him,

But its always that bitches and guitars hit him,

So I killed him with a note thats been poisioned with venom,

Bored as they come, Here without fun

Can't do something without any mun

So I sit here on my black computer chair

On the realtechn9ne Im just gonna share

A verse made straight from bordem

Land of the lost where i come from

In my white T-Shirt and some blue jeans

And in the corner of my eye ramen noodle i see

Gonna eat them up cause im hungry

When I'm eatin stay away from me

Cause It's rude and inpolite to do that

Just let me alone when i eat to get fat

And once I finish It's off to my bed

Gonna fluff up my pillow to rest my head

just got off work, geeze my back hurt/

for what its worth i grin nd i smirk when i let the muzzle squirt/

shovelin shit n pullin your bitch adds ta the size n the girth/

of the wallet within my pocket , ive been known to get it since birth/

simpletons  never get it while mine is  embedded , get it?/

never mind i mind my grind while minions you seem ta forget it/

so let this be a lesson like a professors scheduled profession/

more like a killers psalm of sickness so take heed a deadly   confession/

a simple tale of a rotten seed spit from  the belly of the beast/

some might  say I  spawned from from all the violence of the streets/

a cannibalistic feast ,i see the carnage then i eat/

feeding off the screams of many addicted to the pain i feel n see/

gentrified are the roots that gave way to my being/

aint shit upon this earth i havent touched ,killed or seen/

so take my life or lock me up and watch me sprout the world with hate/

 pac said it best you fucked the world when you infect the infants with your hate/

 

 

 

 

Just finished with doing the 4 bar clash

Ryhming a verse on here is my next task

Just finding a way to make time pass fast

So I guess I'll start with what I'm doing

So far it's just my dog that I'm Shoeing

But he aint bad just trying to help my bordem

A couple pets to his head, I can afford them

Now he left me all alone, should've kept the bone

Gaa, I can't write a verse with nothing to talk about

Mabye next time I do this I'll take a different route

But until then, this is the ryhme I left off with

As you can tell I aint no god ryhming smith

Just the average joe seeing what flow I got

You know, went on here and took a shot

Damn, finally found something to ryhme about

But thats to many lines, I guess Im out

 

 

 

 

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