Hi, I just figured I'd make a official post where people could come to write a verse and have other people criticise it. Kinda like working on your ryhming craft, Ability, and what not.

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Here i am starting a Sickology 101 post

yes its me Jimmy Nims the Host

Bordem is what brought this

I hope alot of you spot this

Only gonna make a 6 bar verse

Let's see what you got to disperse

 

"I shit when I spit and i havent even farted,

u get hit in ur lip mothafucka dont get me started"

 

 

Here i am very bord, and lots of time i can afford

Gonna write a small verse, strong enough to give a curse

Gonna see what i can write, bring my lryical might

Doubt anyone's gonna read this, Ill add you to my long list

But hopfully one day it'll be history

Or it might be i tryed and it's a mystery

Now i got writers block

That shit can suck a cock

Gotta find a way to knock it away

So then lyrically i can spray

Come on now any day, would be okay

I think i got something

uuh, turns outs its basically nothing

cause right now im really sucking

Ill save your eyes the punishment, i have just now done enough of it

nows its someone elses turn

Lets see what we all can learn

 

I got that sick flow you should know

i cold spit these lyrics off my toung making ppsl ear drums go numb

bitch hear i come going hard in the paint main fuck that wack-uh lame

im straight hardcore status bitches dont seem to manage what is played and what is put away

ya'll must be derrange main your music reeks of shit stains

now put that mic down you making me frown

with that lame music you've been throwing around. i got that viscous sound so you motherfuckers

be ready for me to put shit down

 

haha wrote that shit in math class bored as fuck

yall make corny music like a soft porno 

this is a hot delivery this aint fuckin digiorno

i really mourn those that are sleepin on me

cuz im killin em off here's ur blanky now count sheep homey

i betcha if i cut u up u wouldnt bleed ur phony

bout as fake as that powder shit in a box of cheese macaroni 

I'll hide in your closet waiting for you to get home you show up then fast as a rocket i hit you in the dome. Tie you up make you eat baking soda, drag your ass into an asian pagoda make you drink vinegar and have you explode like a volcano then i'll hide in the darkness leaving visible only my red eyes like kaino. You lied when you said you were indivisable cuz now your guts and liver are falling from the sky like ash and cinder causing everyone around the world to shiver.

I'm a rapper i wrote that in like 10 minutes I welcome feedback good or bad

yall betta get ready cuz we on our way,

gettin more ladies than Marvin Gay

How we gonna slay? well its hard to say 

we come with the rough stuff, we hardly sane

But i just wanna feel like im ready to kill

gotta run up on the party on bacardi and pills

but i bet if i chill, i can level the feel 

well chedda make it betta and we settle the deal. BITCH!

 

you all suck.


DYSFUNCTiONAL said:
you all suck.

Damn DYSFUNCIONAL thats some hard feedback

I guess I do admit Looking at my shit I see whack

But was stuff made in 10 minutes, easy to finish

I guess corny i didn't Miss it, Thank you Steve-o for adding that in this shit

Se7en01 thanks for addin to the list and

Carlos Alfaro your shits sadistic

 

Reading my stuff still see shitty

God damn harder then it looks to get witty

My shits as soft as a newborn kitty

 

As my final words thanks for adding

and stabbing and nabbing at this post

I used my head, and read this stuff

above, didn't fly over it like a dove or walk by like it was a ghost

lets see whos next in line

Write up somethin fine

 

 

 

this already exists

Im gonna cut you in half for saying that a tie a

Duplicate you like a gremlin I do this day by day

Cut your moms face like the joker then pry eye away

Im quick like The Leparcon when collectin thy coins

My murder streaks on like a marathon when my gun deploys

Strong like a juggarnot from the 13 ghosts

Take your dead mom and plug her why not necrofeliac hits the spot its what i like the most

Repeat the millioninth thing said on the website and your toast

Use my bitch the lich, the witch doctor put you in your nich

Locust your way she'll pitch make you dissappear like reseting a game when its at a glitch

Then ill come in to peck you with a pickaxe as quick as a woodpecker

Wait until i deck you where that pickaxe made them thick cracks, come stick you with a knife then text ya

son a ransom, go to his house with a gun, use my knife to rip out a lunge

Your family tree is gettin lynched, get ready for a desynch

 

Just Kiddin

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