Heres a song i wrote. i also made the beat that goes with it. let me get some feed back.  HATE IT OR LOVE ITS MINE!!!!

chorus

Standin lookin up and its pourin rain/ feelin more like its pourin pain/ when it rains it pours aint that the game/ feelin drenched wit that pourin pain

verse 1

cant get away from the woes and pains of bad days/ in life the stress my only luck seems/ to ly in the pourin rain it stains/ my soul and my life feels headed for the drains/ 1 step forward to getto get knocked back 2/ sittin thinkin bout what am i gonna do/ sometimes i havent gotta clue and my view is becoming very scewed and the anger inside begins to brew/ cant let it get me down even tho sometimes i wanna quit/ thinkin to myself im not gonna be able to make it/ optimisms runnin short but i have a lil bit/ so i do my best not to bitch and trip/ hopin for the best and expecting the worst/ is how i live goin verse to verse/ beatin on my head like drops of rain/ i stand lookin in the sky to my pourin pain

chorus

Standin lookin up and its pourin rain/ feelin more like its pourin pain/ when it rains it pours aint that the game/ feelin drenched wit that pourin pain

Standin lookin up and its pourin rain/ feelin more like its pourin pain/ when it rains it pours aint that the game/ feelin drenched wit that pourin pain

 

verse 2

Thought i was doin good gettin my life back together/ only to step back into more painful wheather/ only thing i can do is try and be more clever/ and hope and pray that shit gets better/ but then again i just seem to have that luck/ where plans are always gettin completely fucked up/ tellin myself to just suck it up/ tryin not to feel like im stuck in a rut/ keep on goin keep on movin gotta make it gotta do it is how i feel its what im doingoin with the flow like fluid/ until i see my chance to break through it/ takin a bite outta life and thuroughly chewin it/ doin what i gotta do to make it happin/ tryin no to pay attention to the constent tappin/ of the drops on my head that keeps the pain slappin/ and this is real talk to me there aint no actin/ make my own way when i get the opprotunity/ smile when those clouds quit persuing me/ lovin all the people hatin cause im doin me/ cause they know imma shinebrighter than brand new jewlery/ hopin for the best and expectin the worst/ is how i live goin verse to verse/ its beatin on my head like drops of rain/ i stand lookin at the sky to my pourin pain

chorus

Standin lookin up and its pourin rain/ feelin more like its pourin pain/ when it rains it pours aint that the game/ feelin drenched wit that pourin pain

Standin lookin up and its pourin rain/ feelin more like its pourin pain/ when it rains it pours aint that the game/ feelin drenched wit that pourin pain

 

now all i can do is work to get there/ workin my fingers til the bone is bare/ stress got me wanting to pull out my hair/ not sure if my lifes skys will ever be clear/ everyday feels like friday 13th/ wonderin if me and my goals will ever meet/ see the life i want in front of me/ and i can almost reach/ but my worrys keep pullin me beneath/ the surface waves...waves crashin/ water in my lungs and im splashin/ tryin to swim back up will it ever happen/ i see sunlight as i rise the clouds a crackin/ no more worries cause i know theres better days comin/ from my problems you'll never catch me runnin/ for the top of the mountain im gunnin/ as i move forward theres less pain drummin/ the best is happenin but i expected the worst/ im livin good now its time for a new verse/ no more beatin drops of porin rain/ the sky is clear no more pourin pain

chorus

Standin lookin up and its pourin rain/ feelin more like its pourin pain/ when it rains it pours aint that the game/ feelin drenched wit that pourin pain

Standin lookin up and its pourin rain/ feelin more like its pourin pain/ when it rains it pours aint that the game/ feelin drenched wit that pourin pain

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Its ok, the fact that you are a fucking moron that shouldnt writ music doesnt bother me, do what u do. I never said i was part of a gang or acted like it, of course i was wearing all red to the tech show, i was showin love. If the "hate" doesnt matter to u, y are u mad??

DJ MAS MAJISHUN said:
hahahahahaha. do u really think any of your hate is really that relevent. LMMFAO!!!! how can u love sex when ur not gettin any....b-rent ha ha ha the name is lame enough no need to diss that fag...ryan is the weakest of all u wear red cause tech does not because your apart of a gang fuckin internet thugs doin what they do best talkin shit and suckin dick.... ha ha ha hah a hah a hah ahahahahahhahahahhaahahaahahahahaha

"Let me get some feedback, unless it's negative, keep that shit to yourself"

Haha for real though, it was pretty bad son.

Lolololol you mad. Rage a little harder kid

DJ MAS MAJISHUN said:
hahahahahaha. do u really think any of your hate is really that relevent. LMMFAO!!!! how can u love sex when ur not gettin any....b-rent ha ha ha the name is lame enough no need to diss that fag...ryan is the weakest of all u wear red cause tech does not because your apart of a gang fuckin internet thugs doin what they do best talkin shit and suckin dick.... ha ha ha hah a hah a hah ahahahahahhahahahhaahahaahahahahaha
if there opinions are irrelevant then y post it on here askin what ppl think fuckin wack ass internet rapper wanna be go get some studio time instead of postin on here
LOL Flippin' out!

DJ MAS MAJISHUN said:
hahahahahaha. do u really think any of your hate is really that relevent. LMMFAO!!!! how can u love sex when ur not gettin any....b-rent ha ha ha the name is lame enough no need to diss that fag...ryan is the weakest of all u wear red cause tech does not because your apart of a gang fuckin internet thugs doin what they do best talkin shit and suckin dick.... ha ha ha hah a hah a hah ahahahahahhahahahhaahahaahahahahaha
N u thought i was a rager

Siikez said:
LOL Flippin' out!

DJ MAS MAJISHUN said:
hahahahahaha. do u really think any of your hate is really that relevent. LMMFAO!!!! how can u love sex when ur not gettin any....b-rent ha ha ha the name is lame enough no need to diss that fag...ryan is the weakest of all u wear red cause tech does not because your apart of a gang fuckin internet thugs doin what they do best talkin shit and suckin dick.... ha ha ha hah a hah a hah ahahahahahhahahahhaahahaahahahahaha
Lmao, Tiger face rages harder than anyone it seems.

Ryan said:
N u thought i was a rager

Siikez said:
LOL Flippin' out!

DJ MAS MAJISHUN said:
hahahahahaha. do u really think any of your hate is really that relevent. LMMFAO!!!! how can u love sex when ur not gettin any....b-rent ha ha ha the name is lame enough no need to diss that fag...ryan is the weakest of all u wear red cause tech does not because your apart of a gang fuckin internet thugs doin what they do best talkin shit and suckin dick.... ha ha ha hah a hah a hah ahahahahahhahahahhaahahaahahahahaha
LMAO, apparently, thats his new name "tiger face" lol

Siikez said:
Lmao, Tiger face rages harder than anyone it seems.

Ryan said:
N u thought i was a rager

Siikez said:
LOL Flippin' out!

DJ MAS MAJISHUN said:
hahahahahaha. do u really think any of your hate is really that relevent. LMMFAO!!!! how can u love sex when ur not gettin any....b-rent ha ha ha the name is lame enough no need to diss that fag...ryan is the weakest of all u wear red cause tech does not because your apart of a gang fuckin internet thugs doin what they do best talkin shit and suckin dick.... ha ha ha hah a hah a hah ahahahahahhahahahhaahahaahahahahaha

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sometimes i havent gotta clue and my view is becoming askew and the anger inside begins to brew

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BUMP!!! What now motherfuckers!

 

There's nothing wrong with that line, brush up on your english :D lol.

cashed13 said:

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sometimes i havent gotta clue and my view is becoming askew and the anger inside begins to brew

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I was trying to make it a better line... : )

Siikez said:
There's nothing wrong with that line, brush up on your english :D lol.

cashed13 said:

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sometimes i havent gotta clue and my view is becoming askew and the anger inside begins to brew

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