I'm feelin' your style, man.. Truly. It sounds like you got a reverb on 'personality disorder' I didn't particularly care for but, that might just be your equipment, which if it is, my apologies. How long have you been recording?
about 6 months i'm using a digital mic i will go back in and remix it so i actually know what i'm doing i start school for studio engineering in jan but i will try and fix it than reload glad u took time to listen tho