Permalink Reply by Killa Kay on August 3, 2010 at 12:35am who r u?
Permalink Reply by Dukecityspecialist on August 3, 2010 at 12:52am
Permalink Reply by BMC on August 3, 2010 at 1:06am lol im just tryin to get some youtube subs, im just a rapper/singer but mostly rapper haha
BMC said:who r u?
Permalink Reply by ЖĭϞϬ ƦΔϟŦԃ on August 3, 2010 at 1:36am
Permalink Reply by ЖĭϞϬ ƦΔϟŦԃ on August 3, 2010 at 1:40am no need for dumbass replys here
Permalink Reply by Killa Kay on August 3, 2010 at 1:43am Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!
I remember my first rap song.
Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.
I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.
Permalink Reply by ЖĭϞϬ ƦΔϟŦԃ on August 3, 2010 at 1:54am lol i dont rly care if u dont like it bro, cuz i still got fans so im good, im just tryin to get more
King Rasta said:Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!
I remember my first rap song.
Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.
I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.
Permalink Reply by Killa Kay on August 3, 2010 at 1:59am You should care, because I'm sure I'm not the only non-fan. Here's some critiquing you should listen to, not because I'm almighty in anyway, but you'll hear it eventually.
Stop saying "fuck" so much. When I first started writing, I did it too. You think you aren't saying it that often but, you are.
Start rhyming more than one syllable at a time. Like instead of "nice guy" rhyming with "just die", you could say something like "might die".
And "told me" does NOT rhyme with "fuck me". Speaking on that, in this song you're rhyming shit with "me" too much, like "wrong with me" and "ugly".
Rhyming is easy, rhyming well isn't. You can still get your point across and say what you wanna by switching words around and working on it.
k. alvin yang said:lol i dont rly care if u dont like it bro, cuz i still got fans so im good, im just tryin to get more
King Rasta said:Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!
I remember my first rap song.
Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.
I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.
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