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Was that English?
no need for dumbass replys here
who r u?
lol im just tryin to get some youtube subs, im just a rapper/singer but mostly rapper haha

BMC said:
who r u?
Shit I'm down to collab just let me know the details bruh,
haha i meant the guy who posted the thread, but anybody dope out there who wanna collab here's my shit...


k. alvin yang said:
lol im just tryin to get some youtube subs, im just a rapper/singer but mostly rapper haha

BMC said:
who r u?
Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!

I remember my first rap song.

Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.

I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.
No need for dumbass threads here.

CalaKid89 said:
no need for dumbass replys here
lol i dont rly care if u dont like it bro, cuz i still got fans so im good, im just tryin to get more

King Rasta said:
Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!

I remember my first rap song.

Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.

I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.
You should care, because I'm sure I'm not the only non-fan. Here's some critiquing you should listen to, not because I'm almighty in anyway, but you'll hear it eventually.

Stop saying "fuck" so much. When I first started writing, I did it too. You think you aren't saying it that often but, you are.

Start rhyming more than one syllable at a time. Like instead of "nice guy" rhyming with "just die", you could say something like "might die".

And "told me" does NOT rhyme with "fuck me". Speaking on that, in this song you're rhyming shit with "me" too much, like "wrong with me" and "ugly".

Rhyming is easy, rhyming well isn't. You can still get your point across and say what you wanna by switching words around and working on it.


k. alvin yang said:
lol i dont rly care if u dont like it bro, cuz i still got fans so im good, im just tryin to get more

King Rasta said:
Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!

I remember my first rap song.

Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.

I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.
dude i rly dont care lol i still got ppl who support me so why should i listen

King Rasta said:
You should care, because I'm sure I'm not the only non-fan. Here's some critiquing you should listen to, not because I'm almighty in anyway, but you'll hear it eventually.

Stop saying "fuck" so much. When I first started writing, I did it too. You think you aren't saying it that often but, you are.

Start rhyming more than one syllable at a time. Like instead of "nice guy" rhyming with "just die", you could say something like "might die".

And "told me" does NOT rhyme with "fuck me". Speaking on that, in this song you're rhyming shit with "me" too much, like "wrong with me" and "ugly".

Rhyming is easy, rhyming well isn't. You can still get your point across and say what you wanna by switching words around and working on it.


k. alvin yang said:
lol i dont rly care if u dont like it bro, cuz i still got fans so im good, im just tryin to get more

King Rasta said:
Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!

I remember my first rap song.

Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.

I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.

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