Permalink Reply by CalaKid89 on August 14, 2010 at 7:17pm No need for dumbass threads here.
CalaKid89 said:no need for dumbass replys here
Permalink Reply by Je'Twan on August 16, 2010 at 1:44pm You should care, because I'm sure I'm not the only non-fan. Here's some critiquing you should listen to, not because I'm almighty in anyway, but you'll hear it eventually.
Stop saying "fuck" so much. When I first started writing, I did it too. You think you aren't saying it that often but, you are.
Start rhyming more than one syllable at a time. Like instead of "nice guy" rhyming with "just die", you could say something like "might die".
And "told me" does NOT rhyme with "fuck me". Speaking on that, in this song you're rhyming shit with "me" too much, like "wrong with me" and "ugly".
Rhyming is easy, rhyming well isn't. You can still get your point across and say what you wanna by switching words around and working on it.
k. alvin yang said:lol i dont rly care if u dont like it bro, cuz i still got fans so im good, im just tryin to get more
King Rasta said:Alllllllllllviiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!!!!!!!!
I remember my first rap song.
Give it a couple of years, you'll hit puberty. You're gonna get hair in funny places, you're gonna start liking girls (or boys whatever), and most importantly, your voice should change.
I'm sorry man, I ain't trying to hate, but yeah, I can't stand your voice. Nothing personal.
Permalink Reply by Je'Twan on August 16, 2010 at 1:52pm
Permalink Reply by Ricky D on August 16, 2010 at 10:07pm
Permalink Reply by Killa Kay on August 16, 2010 at 10:50pm wow, chill out dudes, i laughed harder at calakid finally commenting on this off topic like a mofo thread!! anyways, he'll take it in rasta, im sure he hears it, just proud of his shit that he might be doin right now, maturity is something you learn eventually
Permalink Reply by draztik on August 16, 2010 at 10:54pm lol bro i respect wat he's sayin, he just kinda came at me disrespectful, now if he just gave me advice and left it at that instead of telling me to hit puberty b4 rapping then it wouldve never been nothin, but he came at me wit some ol' bullshit and thats why this happened but im fine wit it
Ricky D said:wow, chill out dudes, i laughed harder at calakid finally commenting on this off topic like a mofo thread!! anyways, he'll take it in rasta, im sure he hears it, just proud of his shit that he might be doin right now, maturity is something you learn eventually
Permalink Reply by Killa Kay on August 16, 2010 at 10:55pm maybe u guys should battle then
Killa Kay said:lol bro i respect wat he's sayin, he just kinda came at me disrespectful, now if he just gave me advice and left it at that instead of telling me to hit puberty b4 rapping then it wouldve never been nothin, but he came at me wit some ol' bullshit and thats why this happened but im fine wit it
Ricky D said:wow, chill out dudes, i laughed harder at calakid finally commenting on this off topic like a mofo thread!! anyways, he'll take it in rasta, im sure he hears it, just proud of his shit that he might be doin right now, maturity is something you learn eventually
Permalink Reply by CalaKid89 on August 17, 2010 at 12:58am No, he is very smart compared to most on this website
CalaKid89 said:rasta seems like a asshole i dunno um personally but hes prolly an asshole
Killa Kay said:lol nah im good, rasta aint even got his songs on his page, just performances
draztik said:maybe u guys should battle then
Killa Kay said:lol bro i respect wat he's sayin, he just kinda came at me disrespectful, now if he just gave me advice and left it at that instead of telling me to hit puberty b4 rapping then it wouldve never been nothin, but he came at me wit some ol' bullshit and thats why this happened but im fine wit it
Ricky D said:wow, chill out dudes, i laughed harder at calakid finally commenting on this off topic like a mofo thread!! anyways, he'll take it in rasta, im sure he hears it, just proud of his shit that he might be doin right now, maturity is something you learn eventually
Permalink Reply by Berwa H. Mahmod aka Bromotion on August 19, 2010 at 8:09am
Permalink Reply by Killa Kay on August 24, 2010 at 12:35pm well ta me he came off ass a does too many shrooms dumbass
Ahiggity Diggity said:No, he is very smart compared to most on this website
CalaKid89 said:rasta seems like a asshole i dunno um personally but hes prolly an asshole
Killa Kay said:lol nah im good, rasta aint even got his songs on his page, just performances
draztik said:maybe u guys should battle then
Killa Kay said:lol bro i respect wat he's sayin, he just kinda came at me disrespectful, now if he just gave me advice and left it at that instead of telling me to hit puberty b4 rapping then it wouldve never been nothin, but he came at me wit some ol' bullshit and thats why this happened but im fine wit it
Ricky D said:wow, chill out dudes, i laughed harder at calakid finally commenting on this off topic like a mofo thread!! anyways, he'll take it in rasta, im sure he hears it, just proud of his shit that he might be doin right now, maturity is something you learn eventually
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