To be honest, the voice sounds decent. It is deeper than I expected and the beat kinda compliments it. The lyrics seem kinda generic and some aren't too clear. But I do like the flow of it. It has an interesting vibe.
Wow man thanks alot, really. Havent really gotten any critic from people that i dont know, and i really appriciate you taking your time to write all of that. And im going to try to improve my lyrics until the next time ! And you can check my other songs that i have on my youtube channel www.youtube.com/RapsBYSP and tell me what you think about those
shits pretty tight!!
Dude your songs are all pretty sick just took a look at your youtube pretty good!
Thanks to the both of you! I'm going to try to deliver more tracks soon!
Bro, look up Yelawolf. You sound like a deeper voiced Yela, you're seriously good. Beat is way better than I expected and the voice is great for the song. You also have some pretty decent production skills. If you keep working on this shit man, I really don't doubt I'll be hearing from you again. Keep up the good work!
P.S. Great hook too
wow man, you did very well.
Hell yeah I can dig that! Good Job!
wow, damn man yall just made my day! Thanks a lot to all of you!
shared you on a couple sites.
dope sounds more original and professional than i thought haha
Thanks Strangegenius, i've been spreading my music like crazy so you help spreading it is very very appreciated haha!
And gary coleman, man happy you say that, and thanks :D