New Video...check me out Technicians...

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Permalink Reply by Planet Pandamonium on April 17, 2012 at 8:34pm

Bumpin my thread,bumpin,bumpin my thread!!!!!

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Permalink Reply by Jeff Estes on April 18, 2012 at 6:38pm

Hell Yeah that was sick!  I really like that beat and melody alot and man you can flow dude! Real professional and Im gonna check out your other videos too. 

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Permalink Reply by Planet Pandamonium on April 18, 2012 at 9:50pm

Thanks bro,appreciate it...This is the first one on this level, I'll be postin more soon....U can check out more music at http://soundcloud.com/planetpandamonium-1 free downloads.....
 
Jeff Estes said:

Hell Yeah that was sick!  I really like that beat and melody alot and man you can flow dude! Real professional and Im gonna check out your other videos too. 

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Permalink Reply by Unaballa on April 18, 2012 at 10:31pm

bravo my dude. heres a few i put up http://youtu.be/-CP6Yml90YU

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Permalink Reply by Planet Pandamonium on April 19, 2012 at 10:04pm

 Thanks bro, just checked u out, ur nice with the fast flow.....

 Unaballa said:

bravo my dude. heres a few i put up http://youtu.be/-CP6Yml90YU

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Permalink Reply by Unaballa on April 20, 2012 at 2:16am

thanks. im working real hard on the next one right now.  I subscride to your vids so I hope you keep them comen

Planet Pandamonium said:

 Thanks bro, just checked u out, ur nice with the fast flow.....

 Unaballa said:

bravo my dude. heres a few i put up http://youtu.be/-CP6Yml90YU

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Permalink Reply by Planet Pandamonium on April 21, 2012 at 12:07pm

I like pancakes.

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Permalink Reply by Unaballa on April 22, 2012 at 4:21am

i like french toast

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Permalink Reply by Planet Pandamonium on April 22, 2012 at 8:44am

Arizona Tea is refreshing....

 

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Permalink Reply by Unaballa on April 22, 2012 at 6:29pm

here, that will give you a bump and you can go peep this other short vid i put up

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Permalink Reply by 2s5szpayohr9r on April 22, 2012 at 7:44pm

I can appreciate the amount of extensive effort put into this, however, I wasn't feeling it to be honest. Your productions are pretty below average, although not the worst I've ever heard. It almost sounds as if this was released unmastered, and if it was indeed mixed down you should slap whoever you paid to work it for you. If you engineered it yourself, I digress, slap yourself. Don't get me wrong here, I'm not insinuating that you're absolute garbage. I can actually dig your flow and rhyme pattern at times. It seems you're attempting to convey some sort of message within your writing but just fall a little short of accomplishing anything substantial. You seem to lose track of what you're rapping about and throw syllables and words out just for the sake of rhyming. I'm not a fan of that by any means if it doesn't relate to your concept or make sense. Your voice often made me cringe while watching your video. As a pointer you should try to rhyme clearly, firmly annunciate your words, and speak with more bravado. I'd say your live action HD video is probably the most impressive part about your entire project, yet even it falls short to really amaze me. There were just too many corny scenes and unnecessary failed attempts of visual effect. For instance, one of the opening scenes shows you entering a club in your apparent dream land. The entire set-up, color scheme, and theme just looked ridiculous and fake. There are other moments in your video where you almost want to laugh at how bad they are lol. An example would be the scene where your legs are replaced with rocket emission and you're unrealistically glitching through the air. Like I said from the get, I'll give you credit for your effort. Overall however, you need to head back to the drawing board and work on fixing the mistakes I've pointed out. I almost feel as if you'd have some potential if they were corrected.

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Permalink Reply by Unaballa on April 23, 2012 at 12:32am

I want to go out of my way and thank you.  I know that this wasnt my video or anything but man, its nice to see some real ass constructive criticism.  Thanks for not being a tool and throwing pure hate at it.  I would high five you right now if I could.
BottledMindFrame said:

I can appreciate the amount of extensive effort put into this, however, I wasn't feeling it to be honest. Your productions are pretty below average, although not the worst I've ever heard. It almost sounds as if this was released unmastered, and if it was indeed mixed down you should slap whoever you paid to work it for you. If you engineered it yourself, I digress, slap yourself. Don't get me wrong here, I'm not insinuating that you're absolute garbage. I can actually dig your flow and rhyme pattern at times. It seems you're attempting to convey some sort of message within your writing but just fall a little short of accomplishing anything substantial. You seem to lose track of what you're rapping about and throw syllables and words out just for the sake of rhyming. I'm not a fan of that by any means if it doesn't relate to your concept or make sense. Your voice often made me cringe while watching your video. As a pointer you should try to rhyme clearly, firmly annunciate your words, and speak with more bravado. I'd say your live action HD video is probably the most impressive part about your entire project, yet even it falls short to really amaze me. There were just too many corny scenes and unnecessary failed attempts of visual effect. For instance, one of the opening scenes shows you entering a club in your apparent dream land. The entire set-up, color scheme, and theme just looked ridiculous and fake. There are other moments in your video where you almost want to laugh at how bad they are lol. An example would be the scene where your legs are replaced with rocket emission and you're unrealistically glitching through the air. Like I said from the get, I'll give you credit for your effort. Overall however, you need to head back to the drawing board and work on fixing the mistakes I've pointed out. I almost feel as if you'd have some potential if they were corrected.

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