Could someone rate my lyrics? Also if you got some feed back that would also help alot.

 

Smack a bitch down, eat her flesh and then cut her up.
Honour her organs, rape it and give her my best nut.
Dribble with her head, play like everyone is a fan off me
Lynch barack obama on the highest tree, Call it a Kennedy.
Dont got benjamins in my pocket broke as fuck.
well i got some benjamin in my pocket, his nuts.
Son off the devil triple six, dont know any fear.
Grind rick ross into meat, now i got food for a year.
im so sick i hope that god can hear.
When those towers crashed,I had a raging boner.
Like that lives left this earth, children became a loner.
Know how it feels, My live was home alone.
stabbed my mother in her neck, I wondered why she was gone.
Nah just kidding with ya man.
Could never kill my momma, only 50 cent can.
Buy a shit load of candy, cruise around in my van
1 week later you know what got a visit from chris hanson.
Knocked his swedish ass out, now ask the ransom.

Thanks!

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Im getting trolled right now right?
why you ask;D
your not serious are you? I'm not into reading fucked up shit like this, especially when it's not relatable in any way. Maybe a horrorcore site would have positive feedback for you.


Andrew Blades said:
your not serious are you? I'm not into reading fucked up shit like this, especially when it's not relatable in any way. Maybe a horrorcore site would have positive feedback for you.
Ooh ok thanks man!
Sorry didnt mean to offend people in anyway though.....
sux
if these lyrics are serious then u fuckin suck.
But what sucks about it? If you could tell me that it would be of much greater help!

CrAzY~C! said:
if these lyrics are serious then u fuckin suck.
SATANICORE
3/10

needs overall theme not just randon thoughts
That shit is horrible, i rate it -100/10
Ok nice to know. But why is it horrible? Look weed burglar said why its horrible... Why cant you?

Ryan said:
That shit is horrible, i rate it -100/10
Ok thanks! Yeah I know but horrorcore is one off the genre that popped in my head. But ok Ill try it.

Husein said:
I think u can write some good shit but stop with the horrorcore crap, it's only gimmicky and makes u look like a puss.

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