MY DEBUT SONG!!! TITLED "ON MY OWN" CHECK IT OUT!

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 5, 2011 at 6:58pm

thanx alot bro. finally som1 who listened 2 my rhymes!! ya man imma work on the flow big time. like i said its jus a rough draft... i hav so much shit so much better as well yet 2 b recorded. ifu want giv me a like facebook.com/thecrazyc210

trevor said:

it was cool i liked it, sounded original and fresh rhymes. definately need work on the flow.

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Permalink Reply by trevor on October 5, 2011 at 9:00pm

i dont have a facebook or else i would.

CrAzY~C! said:

thanx alot bro. finally som1 who listened 2 my rhymes!! ya man imma work on the flow big time. like i said its jus a rough draft... i hav so much shit so much better as well yet 2 b recorded. ifu want giv me a like facebook.com/thecrazyc210

trevor said:

it was cool i liked it, sounded original and fresh rhymes. definately need work on the flow.

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 5, 2011 at 10:59pm

aight man.

trevor said:

i dont have a facebook or else i would.

CrAzY~C! said:

thanx alot bro. finally som1 who listened 2 my rhymes!! ya man imma work on the flow big time. like i said its jus a rough draft... i hav so much shit so much better as well yet 2 b recorded. ifu want giv me a like facebook.com/thecrazyc210

trevor said:

it was cool i liked it, sounded original and fresh rhymes. definately need work on the flow.

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Permalink Reply by Nutzngutz on October 7, 2011 at 5:56pm

I'd suggest turning down your background layer of vocals that emphasize your rhymes or make sure that they are all on time with the main layer. 

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Permalink Reply by troy alan johnson on October 7, 2011 at 6:03pm

Not bad with the flow your delivery could use work though bro but original thats good man!

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Permalink Reply by PJ on October 7, 2011 at 7:51pm

the quality just needs to be better, idk what mic you use and so on, but try to stand up a couple bed matrices in the corner of the room for a makeshift "micbooth"  haha, it makes a huge difference in the quality.

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 8, 2011 at 2:13am

ya.... i recorded this in my frends closet with a shitty mic lol.

PJ said:

the quality just needs to be better, idk what mic you use and so on, but try to stand up a couple bed matrices in the corner of the room for a makeshift "micbooth"  haha, it makes a huge difference in the quality.

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Permalink Reply by SickoSame on October 8, 2011 at 6:33am

look...everyone is not professional but they are the first to write the hater comment....but this is cool good beat...u r flow and other things will be on point after dedication and xperiance....listen dude u are not wack ...fuck everybody else

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 12, 2011 at 10:44pm

yo man thats very much appreciated... believe it or not i actually get happy when ppl hate on me. im happy no matter what ppl say bcuz this music is my life! im nobody now but an 18 yr old kid from Sa Town TX but this is my career and hate or love im goin 2 the top several years from now.

therealbiruk said:

look...everyone is not professional but they are the first to write the hater comment....but this is cool good beat...u r flow and other things will be on point after dedication and xperiance....listen dude u are not wack ...fuck everybody else

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Permalink Reply by Turbine on October 13, 2011 at 12:57am

Rhymes and lyrics all good.. it's Just your delivery.

 

A lot of it is about confidence.. and yeh you dont sound like your projecting confidently.
Plus the bad quality doesnt help man..

And i think because your voice is so dull, it may bore people..

 

Invest $90-$150 into a good microphone man!

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 13, 2011 at 1:03am

im tryin 2 get a job and imma invest bout 1500 on equipment dawg. listen 2 Real Life im way more pumped up on that 1. im very confident and i swear its all the mics fault. i was yellin n2 that piece of shit hahaha. but thanx alot 4 listenin. "LIKE" my facebook page and support me ifu want man. http://facebook.com/thecrazyc210

Turbine said:

Rhymes and lyrics all good.. it's Just your delivery.

 

A lot of it is about confidence.. and yeh you dont sound like your projecting confidently.
Plus the bad quality doesnt help man..

And i think because your voice is so dull, it may bore people..

 

Invest $90-$150 into a good microphone man!

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 13, 2011 at 1:03am

will do. thanx alot for the feedback and listening

Nutzngutz said:

I'd suggest turning down your background layer of vocals that emphasize your rhymes or make sure that they are all on time with the main layer. 

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