Man With A Plan

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Permalink Reply by DavieDarko! on August 10, 2011 at 12:41am

he sounds like a 12 year old with bad lyrics and no passion but his flow is good . keep going at it its just constructive criticism .

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Permalink Reply by James Franco on August 10, 2011 at 12:54am

Hey bro thanks for listening. Nothing wrong with constructive criticism.

DavieDarko! said:

he sounds like a 12 year old with bad lyrics and no passion but his flow is good . keep going at it its just constructive criticism .

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Permalink Reply by DavieDarko! on August 10, 2011 at 1:22am

yeah well his on beat and got a good flow so good start , don't worry im in the same boat trying to get better  . have a listern but bad quality .

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G4pKEaVehr8

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Permalink Reply by James Franco on August 10, 2011 at 1:25am

Good shit man.  Keep it up.

DavieDarko! said:

yeah well his on beat and got a good flow so good start , don't worry im in the same boat trying to get better  . have a listern but bad quality .

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G4pKEaVehr8

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Permalink Reply by James Franco on August 11, 2011 at 1:16am

bump

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Permalink Reply by trevor on August 11, 2011 at 1:21am

im not gonna download it to listen to it.

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Permalink Reply by Anthony Collodi on August 11, 2011 at 1:31am

to be honest lets just say they both  need  to expand there form its not just about rhyming on beat.  think of constructive patterns and lyricism. analogies and metaphors punch lines story telling, abstract if you go in that direction. speak from yourself  pick one and run vith it.

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Permalink Reply by James Franco on August 11, 2011 at 1:36am

Thanks for the listen bro.

Anthony Collodi said:

to be honest lets just say they both  need  to expand there form its not just about rhyming on beat.  think of constructive patterns and lyricism. analogies and metaphors punch lines story telling, abstract if you go in that direction. speak from yourself  pick one and run vith it.

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Permalink Reply by fuzzy on August 11, 2011 at 1:56am

not bad

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Permalink Reply by James Franco on September 4, 2011 at 11:58pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=77POD_Xt4mo&feature=player_embedded

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