make a short rap

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Permalink Reply by Katastrofik303 on August 30, 2011 at 12:21am

Currently,been havin the urgency,to pick up the pen and just murder beats,

Permanently,sendin other mc's to the emergency,uncertainties whether they get surgery,

Technically,youll never be better then me,my recipe is steadily,wreckin beats,

better get ready cuz im cleverly,murderin my enemies,with my energy,im deadly,

there isnt no remedy,just let it be diceased,im a beast i bleed the beats,bring the heat,

bass so hard it knock ya off ya feet,bars will leave you scarred for eternity you cant fuck with me,prepare for defeat,

or be aware that you cant compete,now say it clear or dont even think to speak,my flow is like a sink wit a leak,

your like a geek,tryin to be mc,but when i pick up the mic youll r.i.p.,you wont like me,cuz i dont give a fuck you aint killin me,you aint as ill as me!!!

 

 

 

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Permalink Reply by Shane on August 30, 2011 at 1:33am

About to make tiers like tyrian purple

back in rome spiralin outta control, Steve Urkle

let me show you, hurdlin hard like mirdan

pullin you with burstin im blurtin out but to shortin

my words im gonna write a verse

assertive kind, one of the best on the mic you heard

im sure but im still a nooby ready to strike a storm

I was born to write bars torn and show my horns

and pour skorn and more onto the floor with I sore

a dinosaur inside myself crys for help but left undelt

somehwere I fell inside my own hell a the devils well

soaken red but not dead my inners bled need a towel now

the smells fowel and I howl at the moon on a tower the sound runs through

lookin for attention but whats to prove why bother to some move

Im a done goose a shot moose lookin for a boost

all I find is noose now I start to lose

 

The "hard like mirdan" is a reference to the game "Demon's Souls". It was a weapon.

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Permalink Reply by Unaballa on November 7, 2011 at 10:46am

Its that boy with the sickness. quick to throat slit chicks. Spit scripts slick from new years to christmas. Diss a hit. The nitwits can sip dick ill Get six bricks and  beat your ass 'till its six shades of shit bitch. Damn im just a man wit the gamma. goin bananas. You can call me the incredible balla, or una banner. Im the big foot crabwalkin who  killed a mc with a hammer. I Watched the tape but luckily I show up blurry in the cameras!What it do when i wreck ya rude? I reckoned you would wanna do somen. Got you standin, starin scared.I guess you aint gonna do nothin. Better move when a mutha fuckin dude comes through with a brand of  kung fu thuggin.  CHOP!  I serial killed the silly rabbit now i pimpin out trix for muffin tops. Im frosted feelin great. I shot Tony cause he flaked. When I did in digem he didnt dig the divit my smackes left in his face. Im fuckin krunk, I punched the captain in his crunch. damn hes gone. But I happen to be this cereal rap industrys  breakfest of champions!

Shane said:

About to make tiers like tyrian purple

back in rome spiralin outta control, Steve Urkle

let me show you, hurdlin hard like mirdan

pullin you with burstin im blurtin out but to shortin

my words im gonna write a verse

assertive kind, one of the best on the mic you heard

im sure but im still a nooby ready to strike a storm

I was born to write bars torn and show my horns

and pour skorn and more onto the floor with I sore

a dinosaur inside myself crys for help but left undelt

somehwere I fell inside my own hell a the devils well

soaken red but not dead my inners bled need a towel now

the smells fowel and I howl at the moon on a tower the sound runs through

lookin for attention but whats to prove why bother to some move

Im a done goose a shot moose lookin for a boost

all I find is noose now I start to lose

 

The "hard like mirdan" is a reference to the game "Demon's Souls". It was a weapon.

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Permalink Reply by DERANGED 2010 on November 7, 2011 at 1:15pm

i cant stop keep coming back like the walking dead
always hot like sauna smelling of the ganja
an evil matha fucka with a plan to kill you all
evil thoughtz on repete replay over in my skull
product of a broken home i was a fetus from the dark side of the womb
now im free from the tomb to present these dark thoughtz to you
fifteen cadavers the mind of serial killer the hata erasa
the pen to the paper go ghetta neck cutta out the asylum
i got this razor blade for em if they wanna test me come get me
if you wanna try and tame the beast you better at least bring your game up to par
cause my bars present murder lyrical slaughter hotter then fire

 

some bars from a new track im writing called deseased  coming soon on the new sick hop album "Dark Thoughtz"

http://www.wix.com/derangedrhymedottekc/deranged2011

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