If you have a few minutes to spare, peep this song and let me know what you think. Wen The Moon Eclypse- My City

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Permalink Reply by Smevz on May 2, 2013 at 7:19pm

great flows, love the subject matter as well. good job!

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Permalink Reply by Malevolent Mike on May 3, 2013 at 6:00am

Some solid stuff, the singing portion could use some work is my main criticism.

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Permalink Reply by Frankie Lyrical on May 3, 2013 at 9:27am

Thanks to both of you. And yeah the singing sucks ass lol we couldn't get a singer in in time to sing the hook, so we had to do it ourselves

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Permalink Reply by Shane on May 3, 2013 at 3:57pm

Not bad but nothing I'd put in my library. The biggest thing with new artists is they don't add anything to the table. And to release a track with a hook you know is shitty shows your not really serious about the craft. I'd say work a little on everything like rhymes, flow, delivery and originality. But I wouldn't say your a noob for lack of a better word. Maybe a 4/10 which is better then a lot of people who post there raps.

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Permalink Reply by Frankie Lyrical on May 3, 2013 at 6:45pm

We are very serious about our craft. We would not have released it, but we had to because it was for a contest. Thank you for your honest assessment though, it's greatly appreciated. 

Shane said:

Not bad but nothing I'd put in my library. The biggest thing with new artists is they don't add anything to the table. And to release a track with a hook you know is shitty shows your not really serious about the craft. I'd say work a little on everything like rhymes, flow, delivery and originality. But I wouldn't say your a noob for lack of a better word. Maybe a 4/10 which is better then a lot of people who post there raps.

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