Id love sum feedback on my music :)

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Permalink Reply by Nick Ritter on October 5, 2010 at 1:57am

Nice man. I really like your style of flow on these songs. I like the second song the best, you did a good job of rapping fast and having a great flow while at the same time having very good diction and clarity to you words. You have potential. hope that helps

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Permalink Reply by William Hart on October 5, 2010 at 2:06am

This is pretty damn good man. Like was said before the flow and word usage is pretty good. The only things I would say you should work with are the beat itself, if you made it a little more complex and then match the volume better with the words. For instance in "Let em Know", I felt like the volume on the beat should have been louder on the chorus, on the verses it sounded perfect because it's sort of behind your rap but as you sang it could pick up and be epic powered. That can all be worked with easy though, the hard part is the writing and vocals but you have that.

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Permalink Reply by Kyle on October 5, 2010 at 2:44am

Dang I'm impressed. You're good enough you should buy some decent equipment or some studio time and get a mixtape going.

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Permalink Reply by troy alan johnson on October 5, 2010 at 10:58am

Ha i preciate all that, guys. yeah i know i have trouble sumtimes with the volume i am really truing to work on that. i have a loooooot more songs and if i keep getting feedback like this and i now that alot of ppl are checkin it out, i will def put summore up. i really do appriciate this tho yall.

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