Finally got my 2nd song uploaded on youtube!!

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 16, 2011 at 5:03am

bump... tell me what yall think

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Permalink Reply by Insane1 on October 16, 2011 at 5:33am

First guy was dope, but the lyrics need to come out more over the beat. The hook is......being nice, not my type of style, it's off beat, off rhythm and sounds.....wrong. The second guy... just wasn't feeling it.

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Permalink Reply by Ryan on October 16, 2011 at 7:55am

Everything he said^^^^^^

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Permalink Reply by trevor on October 16, 2011 at 12:07pm

the second dude is you right, i dont know what ^those two talking about I thought it was sick, dont really have any criticism except the hook was gay.

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Permalink Reply by trevor on October 16, 2011 at 12:07pm

it wasnt even off beat.

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Permalink Reply by Blizzum on October 16, 2011 at 3:01pm

Hook...wasnt feeling it...keep doing your thing tho youll only get better.

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 16, 2011 at 6:59pm

well the 2nd guy was me and thats cool if u aint feelin it. cant please everybody. thanx 4 listenin & givin ur honest opinion

Insane1 said:

First guy was dope, but the lyrics need to come out more over the beat. The hook is......being nice, not my type of style, it's off beat, off rhythm and sounds.....wrong. The second guy... just wasn't feeling it.

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 16, 2011 at 7:01pm

thanx man and ya im gettin some hate on that hook... well thats what happens when u dont good equipment to turn jus sayin "real life shit do it 4 every1 who feels like this" n2 an old skool soundin hook and hav 2 do it urself... im still workin on my shit and im only gonna get better and better. and ya the 2nd guy is me

trevor said:

the second dude is you right, i dont know what ^those two talking about I thought it was sick, dont really have any criticism except the hook was gay.

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Permalink Reply by Turbine on October 16, 2011 at 10:09pm

Heaps better then the other track!

But yeh hook.. dry and the echo/choppy effect your going for should be done with actual effects.
Not vocally imitated.. 

 

Not bad though man. Look forward to hearing some tracks in decent quality.

 

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Permalink Reply by PJ on October 16, 2011 at 11:53pm

flow was really rough, as well as the hook.  better quality on this one though, and I like the old school soundin beat a bunch.  Also your songs need to have more of a purpose.  your all over the place.  tell a story with your songs.  

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Permalink Reply by CrAzY~C! on October 17, 2011 at 12:32am

u need 2 listen up more. i am tellin stories

PJ said:

flow was really rough, as well as the hook.  better quality on this one though, and I like the old school soundin beat a bunch.  Also your songs need to have more of a purpose.  your all over the place.  tell a story with your songs.  

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Permalink Reply by PJ on October 17, 2011 at 12:56am

bout what?  being real?  everyone is real.

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