i havent gotten any replies bout my 2nd song and i finally got it on youtube! check it out and tell me what you think!.... all hate love criticism loved and accepted. thanx everybody and if u like it share it with ur friends & help me out!
First guy was dope, but the lyrics need to come out more over the beat. The hook is......being nice, not my type of style, it's off beat, off rhythm and sounds.....wrong. The second guy... just wasn't feeling it.
the second dude is you right, i dont know what ^those two talking about I thought it was sick, dont really have any criticism except the hook was gay.
Heaps better then the other track!
But yeh hook.. dry and the echo/choppy effect your going for should be done with actual effects.
Not vocally imitated..
Not bad though man. Look forward to hearing some tracks in decent quality.
flow was really rough, as well as the hook. better quality on this one though, and I like the old school soundin beat a bunch. Also your songs need to have more of a purpose. your all over the place. tell a story with your songs.