Double meaning, two identical verses, two complete different meanings

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Permalink Reply by DJ605 on July 26, 2011 at 8:52pm

yeah, i'm not feelin this at all. just sounds like you're slurring all your words. reading the lyrics was the only thing that kept me watching for a minute. sorry..

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Permalink Reply by Randy on July 26, 2011 at 9:59pm

It's an incredibly innovative idea. But, the echo soundin' thing and your slurry words stop it from sparking. There were times when I'd read the lyrics thinkin, 'that's what he's sayin?' It could do something but, it's not there yet.

 

Edit: I truly applaud the effort, though. There's enough copies of clones; we don't need no more. You know there's only fifty different words in all of 'Green Eggs and Ham'? I've thought of writing a song to the concept but, never tried. You'd have to choose words pretty carefully..

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Permalink Reply by Cristobal on July 26, 2011 at 10:08pm

I liked the creativity. Though wasn't feeling the video/lyrics/slurring, though.

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Permalink Reply by PJ on July 26, 2011 at 11:25pm

what you said about green eggs and ham reminds me of tech n9nes verse on b boy and how every word starts with b

Randy said:

It's an incredibly innovative idea. But, the echo soundin' thing and your slurry words stop it from sparking. There were times when I'd read the lyrics thinkin, 'that's what he's sayin?' It could do something but, it's not there yet.

 

Edit: I truly applaud the effort, though. There's enough copies of clones; we don't need no more. You know there's only fifty different words in all of 'Green Eggs and Ham'? I've thought of writing a song to the concept but, never tried. You'd have to choose words pretty carefully..

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Permalink Reply by trevor on July 26, 2011 at 11:44pm

you got potential, sick beats, good flow, but i dont understand how you think people will listen to this if they cant understand what you are saying, like if the lyrics were not in the video i might of thought it was in a different language.

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Permalink Reply by Randy on August 1, 2011 at 3:04pm

It's called alliteration. I dunno how you feel about Pac but, check out his song "If I die tonight"

PJ said:

what you said about green eggs and ham reminds me of tech n9nes verse on b boy and how every word starts with b

Randy said:

It's an incredibly innovative idea. But, the echo soundin' thing and your slurry words stop it from sparking. There were times when I'd read the lyrics thinkin, 'that's what he's sayin?' It could do something but, it's not there yet.

 

Edit: I truly applaud the effort, though. There's enough copies of clones; we don't need no more. You know there's only fifty different words in all of 'Green Eggs and Ham'? I've thought of writing a song to the concept but, never tried. You'd have to choose words pretty carefully..

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Permalink Reply by Zachary on August 28, 2011 at 9:57am

Good work mate, keep it real bro. ONE

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