Nice lyrics bro, I like the style. I think you need to iron out some wrinkles in the flow and make it sound a bit more natural. But its not bad man, you can only get better.
good job bro, I like what you're about n i can say that i never heard a style like yours which is a good thing. keep it up so you'll be more polished. out of 10 i'll give u a 7.5 for "Questions". My music is comin soon too so I hope to hear from u, artist to artist. duces OH
n you should try a track or too with a hardcore style (or voice), i would like to hear what that would sound like. yup
P.S. Nice hook!