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Permalink Reply by Mic E.D. on February 15, 2010 at 4:17pm

Nice lyrics bro, I like the style. I think you need to iron out some wrinkles in the flow and make it sound a bit more natural. But its not bad man, you can only get better.

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Permalink Reply by Mic E.D. on February 15, 2010 at 4:18pm

P.S. Nice hook!

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Permalink Reply by ELI on February 15, 2010 at 4:43pm

good job bro, I like what you're about n i can say that i never heard a style like yours which is a good thing. keep it up so you'll be more polished. out of 10 i'll give u a 7.5 for "Questions". My music is comin soon too so I hope to hear from u, artist to artist. duces

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n you should try a track or too with a hardcore style (or voice), i would like to hear what that would sound like. yup

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Permalink Reply by Tip-C on February 15, 2010 at 10:48pm

thanks for Sharin your thoughts man! my flow is maybe not the best on this song, but it was my first time trying to write something like it. Putting 2 short stories together and trying to make them rhyme and flow good was definitely a challenge! but if you wanna here some of my shit with more of a tech n9nish flow check out "where's the hometown love" and "it's tip-c"

Mic E.D. said:

Nice lyrics bro, I like the style. I think you need to iron out some wrinkles in the flow and make it sound a bit more natural. But its not bad man, you can only get better.

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Permalink Reply by Tip-C on February 16, 2010 at 12:06am

thanks for the feedback brotha! i'll take the 7.5 I guess, it's only the 4th song I've done solo so there's definitely time to get better. and glad you noticed! I try to come up with the most original topics I can and just be me through music ya know? hit me up when you get some music goin and I'll check it out for sure.. I dunno if you mean hardcore like screamo? cuz I can't do that lol. but if you go through the songs on my page we do have some darker more hardcore shit

ELI said:

good job bro, I like what you're about n i can say that i never heard a style like yours which is a good thing. keep it up so you'll be more polished. out of 10 i'll give u a 7.5 for "Questions". My music is comin soon too so I hope to hear from u, artist to artist. duces OH
n you should try a track or too with a hardcore style (or voice), i would like to hear what that would sound like. yup

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Permalink Reply by Tip-C on February 16, 2010 at 12:14am

glad you like it! it's kinda funny I wrote the hook first and I almost wasn't even gonna use it. cuz I didn't wanna come off as like suicidal to people lol. but then I figured I could flip it so it's other people saying those words not myself. I'll have more shit up soon so keep in touch!

Mic E.D. said:

P.S. Nice hook!

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