BOOGIE!!!! Bebe Booghz Feat. Kas... Thoughts Please?
Boohgz is having a contest for people to be on his mixtape. this is the song i chose. i want to enter it in the contest but i want your thoughts first. Its a 5 dollar entry fee. the most votes wins. Let me know what you think.
WATCH IN 480P. I tried to upload it in HD but 480 is the highest resolution it allows.
My Verse Lyrics:
You dont know kas bout to blast on a track with booghz get back,
hit you with the lyrical click clack
your rhymin is wick whack,
your girl all up on my sack
, you know that i spit crack,
got haters duckin like aflac,
but you dont know what flows through the blood of a beast,
cannibal, animal, eatin rappers like a royal feast.
Music is my common ground and im risin
just like yeast and thats just to say the least,
Immaculate, attackin it, mackin it, while you lackin it,
starting a revolution seeking restitution,
cuz im the king and this track is my execution,
no such thing as losin cuz im cruisin for a brusin in this music.
so bow down to the kas almighty,
got em bouncin up and down cuz the kid gets hyphy,
i got it ever so slightly
, You dont know me so dont doubt my psyche cuz on the track i do it like nike.
Is it worthy?
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Permalink Reply by Tizzle Nizzle on -
Your one and two syllable rhymes were pretty predictable. Other than that it seems pretty dope, no vid tho?
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Permalink Reply by Joshua D K on -
no, no video. as of now i dont have anything to shoot with.. but i want to make one eventually.
im more focused on making new songs.
thanks for the feedback though. any suggestions you would make? keep in mind im using a rockband mic and audacity to record. lol
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Permalink Reply by Tizzle Nizzle on
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I guess my only suggestion would be to focus on having more intricate rhymes. Not that one and two syllable rhymes are bad, just try to use less predictable rhymes. Try using a rhyming dictionary or change the pronunciation of the words a bit to make for a more clever rhyme.
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Permalink Reply by Joshua D K on
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should i enter it in the contest?
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